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WIP: Logo Redesign

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A redesign of a logo for :iconwindycitypuma: 's contest - the contest was over long ago, I'm not worried about the deadline or winning anything at this point. Mostly I just want to do this because I said I would, and I want to follow through EVEN IF IT TAKES ME FOREVER DAMN IT

Anyway...almost there with a final design, but...it still doesn't look that good to me. So I'm opening this up to critique and feedback. In particular I'd like more ideas for the placement and arrangement of the elements - the text, the soccer ball, the shapes. I wanted to do something dynamic and interesting (why I've got the text on a slant) but find a nice harmony for everything, as opposed to looking clunky (which it kind of does now imho). I'd like to keep it simple, but I'm not opposed to adding another thing or two for visual interest-

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Or, you know, start with "I like it because..." or "I don't like it because..." and go from there, list any changes you'd make.
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Looks really nice :D I like this font.